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totomai
11-05-2005, 09:10 AM
Japanese Doll

The glass room protects your porcelain skin
against the rays of the rising sun;
bends them to my eyes.
That rainbow halo, a magic of light,
on your face begins my day.

Each morning, before traditional duels
with the teacup, I crawl, over the futon,
toward you to become enthralled
by the kanzashi on your hair.

The pink hue on your face mirrors
the floral kimono you wear.

How I wish I were the pillow on your back
or the paper fan that your delicate hand holds.
When the moon is out, your silhouette
assures me of a good night's sleep.

In dreamland, I could be a Japanese doll too,
with a heart-shaped forehead
and a katana to safeguard you.

Under the cherry blossoms,
You whisper
sayonara
that word wakes me up;
now, pieces of glass and porcelain
cover the wooden floor;

only the kanzashi, paper fan
and kimono remain whole.

-totomai


PS

The poem I wrote sa naging gf ko na Japanese.

docomo
11-05-2005, 07:27 PM
....naaks! proud girlfriend sya siguro... kayo pa ba? .. fishing ako :D
... wish ko din may magsulat ng tulang ganito sa akin ... (asa pa ba ako) :D :p

DJchot
11-05-2005, 07:47 PM
....naaks! proud girlfriend sya siguro... kayo pa ba? .. fishing ako :D
... wish ko din may magsulat ng tulang ganito sa akin ... (asa pa ba ako) :D :p

may japanese troll din ba? (peace pre!)

docomo
11-05-2005, 07:50 PM
may japanese troll din ba? (peace pre!)

pwede na din basta tula..kakaiba pa! ..:p

gabby
11-06-2005, 12:34 AM
....naaks! proud girlfriend sya siguro... kayo pa ba? .. fishing ako :D
... wish ko din may magsulat ng tulang ganito sa akin ... (asa pa ba ako) :D :p

Hesus! Uma-andar na naman ang pagka-romantiko nito! Gusto mo tula-an kita? :)

totomai
11-06-2005, 02:07 PM
kakatuwa naman kau dito, wala na po kami, nauntog yata :D

docomo
11-07-2005, 07:52 PM
kakatuwa naman kau dito, wala na po kami, nauntog yata :D

nauntog na pala eh... ako na lang muna alayan mo ng tula habang wala pa :p

docomo
11-07-2005, 08:02 PM
Hesus! Uma-andar na naman ang pagka-romantiko nito! Gusto mo tula-an kita? :)

.. sige pare tulaan mo ako pero wag sa dialect mo ha :p

Little Johnny
11-07-2005, 08:17 PM
.. sige pare tulaan mo ako pero wag sa dialect mo ha :p

spanish ba ang tinutukoy mo docomo??? naalala ko kc yung... "Viva Filipina! Mabuhay!"... hihihi

peace tau preng gabby, ang laki-laki mo na.... pre pa-kiss :kiss: :love:

docomo
11-07-2005, 09:13 PM
spanish ba ang tinutukoy mo docomo??? naalala ko kc yung... "Viva Filipina! Mabuhay!"... hihihi

peace tau preng gabby, ang laki-laki mo na.... pre pa-kiss :kiss: :love:

spanish at bisaya po...

pag spanish ~ te quiero mucho lang ang pinakamagandang word para sa akin

pag bisaya naman ~ ambot sa imo lang alam ko :)

totomai
11-08-2005, 08:39 AM
nauntog na pala eh... ako na lang muna alayan mo ng tula habang wala pa :p

ano naman klaseng tula :p

docomo
11-08-2005, 05:34 PM
ano naman klaseng tula :p

uy serious ka :D

totomai
11-09-2005, 08:39 AM
uy serious ka :D

joke lang :p

mOtt_erU
09-12-2006, 06:27 PM
hi totomai San:)
wow naman, may poem kapa sa dati mong koibito...
I`m sure kung mababasa niya lang yan eh Ureshiikunarru sya.

totomai
10-09-2006, 11:40 PM
hi totomai San:)
wow naman, may poem kapa sa dati mong koibito...
I`m sure kung mababasa niya lang yan eh Ureshiikunarru sya.

di siguro. babarilin nya ako. :p