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Eleina
11-12-2006, 03:48 PM
Sitting....

.....staring at nothingness.

Soon, I noticed,

tears trickling down my cheeks.

"Why?"....asked my husband "Why?"

With eyes red,

I turned to him.

In his ears I whispered....

"I'm waiting for a reply..."

He looked at me straight in the eyes,

His hand covered mine and

His silence urged me to continue

And so I said...

"They are taking time."

He wrapped his arms around me

to console me...

comfort me...

It was evident

he loves me.

He doesn't want to rush me.

So i took his face in my hand,

my breath on his face.

I told him bold faced...

"Sometimes....

I wish...

TF members would reply quickly.":p



---sensya na po la kasi akong magawa. Nakakaluha kasi ang glare ng monitor paglagi ka nakatitig :) so eto on the spot ka-kornihan. I hope you enjoy!

chris_rock
11-12-2006, 03:51 PM
hehe, nice one :D

love0308
11-12-2006, 04:47 PM
he he elaine ang sarap pa naman ng pagka basa ko:D

Autumn
11-12-2006, 09:08 PM
good one..nadali mo ah...:D

alamagawa
11-12-2006, 10:28 PM
nice nakakatouch.:) ........nakakatouch na sana....:p tutulu na luha ko biglang bumalik.........

mOtt_erU
11-13-2006, 12:19 AM
...:D okey to `ha
dinadama ko pa naman kada salita...akala ko tula, tas biglang comedy..
pero omoshirokatta:)

hayaren
11-15-2006, 02:53 AM
:crash: sabi ko na nga ba:fish:

forest pixie
11-15-2006, 11:54 PM
Galing talaga Ms. Elaina - pero dala na ako, bago mag react ang mababaw na tuluan ng luha, basa ko muna hanggang sa hulian ng tula:D ala pa natulo :)

MIMI
11-16-2006, 01:27 PM
eleina san makata ka pala, :D